TITANIC PLAY
Characters
Captain
Engineer
Rose
Jack
Waitress
People on the Titanic
Rose and Jack plan their assassination on the Captain for evil plans.
The captain and Rose meet for a cup of coffee, but Rose has a different plan.
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| The captain is killed after Rose puts a poison pill to kill the captain |
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| Everyone about to fall after the Titanic hits the iceberg. |
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| The engineer finds out that Jack and Rose crashed the ship. |
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| The engineer calls all passengers to proceed to the deck for a emergency |
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| The passengers start to panic, and the engineer prepares a life boat, |
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The passengers get on the boat but they fall off and die.THE END |
What we could have improved on?
We could have improved our voice and make it to the type of character's voice.
We could had made our act much more melodramatic.
We could have made better melodramatic expressions and movements,
This is an interesting post and I love the photos that really show all your group's hard work and the progression of the story. Your description is basic but clear because you have structured it in an organized way and stated who the characters were and summarized the plot with each image.To get a higher grade you need to write in a lot more detail; you could have included some examples of how you showed your character using gestures and dialogue, and also thought about more strengths and weaknesses of this performance. How could you have improved your voice? (You do not say) How could you improve your use of melodramatic gestures? You need to give specific examples to justify your comments. 3/8 Criterion A
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